Amelia looks at the water where moonlight transmutes into a flowy passage. She wonders how it would be to walk such path. Would it free her? Would it liberate all fears? She imagines fears released and flying away like colourful butterflies. Amelia observes the night, the fluttery rainbow leaving her body as she walks forward.
_____Adriana Citlali
VII-II-MMXVI
Poetic prose in 55 words. Written for the Flash 55 PLUS! challenge.
A lovely transmutation of fear here. k.
Yur descriptions are so creative. Love the fluttery butterfly.
Thank you!
You’re welcome!
Oh yes.. if we could just walk on that spilled silver the moon leaves…
fluttery rainbow leaving her
body as she walks forward.
Somewhat a mystic feel here Adriana! A feel of wanting to connect with the sub-conscious! Great lines!
Hank
fluttery rainbow leaving her
body as she walks forward.
Seems to be somewhat connected to the mystic. A tendency to overcome and relate with the sub-conscious. Great lines Adriana!
Hank kaykuala
Thank you! That was the inspiration of the day.
I also think that the end makes a connection with the inner self (Amelia’s inner self in this case); and, by connecting, she releases her fears and moves forward.
What a delectable fantasy.
A wonderful capture of a fleeting moment.
I wonder where that road would take one. Lovely thought
Beautiful -a strange magic here.
moonlight and a thought I think many have experienced. Nice capture in 55
Oh, I love the sense of merging with the light here. Really beautiful, prose here. 🙂
Stunning imagery, especially the last line. ♥