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When space is silence…

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Full stop

Posted on July 28, 2014 By adcitlali

In the absence of distractions   
my own darkness fills this silence   

Change is here again   
Planned path / unknown outcome   
A life to be –or not   

Too much time   
too many thoughts blinking in the dark   

Arbitrary memories flash here and there   
Fractals of a chaotic dream   
Intermittent doubts   

Change is the next step   

A possible success flutters around   
It crashes with uncertainty   
Transmutes into a full stop   


Temporary silence in a dark room   


Change is constant   

Doubts are doubted   

Silence fills my darkness

Full stop  .


_____Adriana Citlali
XXIX-VII-MMXIV


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Comments (4)

  1. Bridge2Vision says:
    July 29, 2014 at 3:52 pm

    Oh yes Adriana, you have lassooed the ‘success-or-won’t-it-be’ dragon and granted me safety in your full stop. Beautiful and oh-so-functional, all in one piece.

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    1. Adriana Citlali Ramírez says:
      July 30, 2014 at 11:11 pm

      Thank you, Lori. The dragon gets loose every now and then, but we need to control him. 🙂

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  2. zuzalatas says:
    July 30, 2014 at 6:16 pm

    full light helps during dark times, then the full stops pass by…you know. Thanks for this one, it’s great!

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    1. Adriana Citlali Ramírez says:
      July 30, 2014 at 11:15 pm

      You are right. Sometimes it is difficult to find the source of full light, or to remember that a match and a candle never let you down… smiles…
      Thanks for your visit!

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