Her eyes are absence.
They live in the back of her head
seeking something hidden
between
gravity
and the inconsistency of understanding a simple, yet incomplete, equation.
The neurons are moving briskly,
running away like dots in an expanding balloon.
Her eyes seek independent paths;
they get confused while selecting the domain that should be followed.
Everything is changing with pulses accelerating the beat of life.
One eye collapses right after a rainbow-colored explosion becomes attractive.
The other is rapt by dark energy and travels away faster than white rays.
_____Adriana Citlali
XVIII-XI-MMIII
XVIII-XI-MMXIII
Sci-Fi poetry written for Poetics | dVerse.
A very creative take on the prompt! Really interesting. k.
Thank you!
This is very interesting, and well done! I like this take on the prompt too!
Almost surreal in approach with the play on the eyes ~ Good one ~
Woe I can sympathize with feeling like that with only stars as company… Great feeling of solitude in space
what a lovely write, the stars lay outside of us as as well as within….
stacy lynn mar
http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/
Nice take on the prompt!