Name your poison –he said
I thought of you
A rum carnation with crimson zest
I blent a smile
Shaken words stirred the silence
You glimpsed at me
_____Adriana Citlali
XI-X-MMXVI
dVerse | Poets Pub –dVerse Poetics: Muse Mixology
Today’s challenge is to incorporate pub and drinking terms into a poem, without a bar/drinking scene, and within 33 words max.
Very nice.
“shaken words stirred the silence” — this line, in particular, is wonderful.
Naming someone your poison in this way gets into your veins.
shaken words can stir up a lot 🙂 loved this
I was trying to imagine “a rum carnation with crimson zest”. Interesting. 🙂
Nice idea of see someone as one’s choice poison.
Intriguing.
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Thank you.