This is the moment
I want to keep in a frozen time
frozen by the flame that opens eternity
to mortal life
This is the air
I needed to breathe
The touch
I wanted to hold
The peace
I was praying to have
I don’t need sun anymore
This light is blazing my heart
Bliss is closer than ever
it falls through the rainbow
and there’s a smile begging to stay
This is my moment
I’m flying outside the limits of time
_____Adriana Citlali
XIII-IX-MMIII
XXVII-IV-MMXII
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ah you may not be able to hold onto so relish that moment….so freeing and beautiful a moment of bliss you have captured here….nice….uplifting…
and welcome as well to the pub…smiles.
I am pleased to have joined the pub. Thank you for your comments!
That moment of freedom captured so well. I feel uplifted from my visit. Thanks for stopping by to read my piece and and I appreciate your input.
Thank you for your kind words.
“I don’t need sun anymore, This light is blazing my heart” What a great line! I wish I’d thought of it! Amazing poem. 🙂