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The hollow at the night’s end

Posted on August 23, 2015 By adcitlali

All chiseled good looks      
you fix your hair      
with a half smile       I stare

You are that foreign     
confident puzzle     
you chose to be     

        I let you be   
        I let you stain my dream   
        with superior charm and wit   

        I will forget you anyway
        after the dumb alarm
        cries its feckless call

        Not yet               Not!

I’m sober with a wine high
I smile a winner look
The luminous day turns dark

You approach me
I reach for your hand

I’m in the hollow of your arms

We fall into lucid passion
You close my eyes

Now we dance a spiral waltz

I touch your hair
You seduce my lips

We neglect the vulnerable nature
of our eternity

… spin in limitless rapture

You touch my hips
I kiss your neck

A whirl in absolute ecstasy

        The feckless call
        Sun invading my bed

        The silent hollow of this morning!

        I shut my eyes      eager
        to erase the path of no return

        The silent hollow in my room!

                        I refuse

        will not forget!


_____Adriana Citlali
XXIII-VIII-MMXV

Sunday Whirl (Wordle #213)

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Comments (3)

  1. whimsygizmo says:
    August 24, 2015 at 3:49 pm

    So much passion here. This is beautiful.

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    1. Adriana Citlali Ramírez says:
      August 28, 2015 at 5:16 pm

      Passion is exactly what I wanted to write about. Thanks for visiting!

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  2. mercurial flecks says:
    December 5, 2015 at 6:26 pm

    This is so so so so good!

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