23:21 Exchange sanity for a stranger’s kiss. It’s an apple, bite it!
08:21 Reject the thought, forget the dream: reality –a daily routine.
19:21 Now wonder if this wind still remembers the warmth of his daring lips.
_____Adriana Citlali
XXV-XI-MMXIII
American sentences (17 syllables each) for Meeting the Bar | dVerse.
ha . nice…i like the allusion to temptation…a temporary lack of sanity…but how in the last the feelings still echo forward…..very nice…
and you gave me a great idea too…
Ha! I’m very curious about what that idea will turn into. Planning a new poem?
ah – it’s tough to stick to the daily routine of reality…sometimes i wanna kiss a stranger…maybe on the train…ha…now that would probably get me into trouble…smiles
We cannot avoid some daily routines but we can use our imagination to have fun –or write poems.
Each of these is profound. I am especially thinking about the second one and the relationship between thoughts and dreams and reality. Nice meeting you at dVerse!
Likewise, a pleasure meeting you.
Each one is a thought-provoking American sentence. The first one made me smile, the second very true and I like the nostalgia of the third.
Very nice set! Liked how you put them together.
Beautifully composed. I shall bite the apple!
Anna :o]
Smiles… Bite the apple! I want to do it as well.
I liked them all – they all point to a spirit of fun, adventure, mystery. They are doing just what a good poem should do, make the reader want MORE!
These are quite wonderful – but that third one is a total wow!
Very nice … the last one tells such a story …and I can sympathize with the Scandinavian winter/autumn… 🙂
You caught me there! It is still autumn but it feels like winter to me. 🙂