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When space is silence…

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Light up, provoke life!

Posted on November 3, 2013 By adcitlali

I want to start again        
                              … with a simple canvas        
ready for a life full of contrast        
    drEamY    CHaOs       
shiny change     
                        uncertain outcome   
                        of known possibilities thru unmapped routes       

       A new day coloured by bubbly sparkles    
      of sweet pear cider and bright jade elixir    

     I want to wake up to a wind of Quetzal wings    
           Eclipse the sunset with supernovas          
    Dance ’round‘a fire that gives birth to new suns    
End the day dreaming under ethereal aurorae borealis       


_____Adriana Citlali
XVII-V-MMIV
XXIII-X-MMXIII


 
Today at dVerse we are taking a ride on the color wheel.
Follow the link to participate: Poetics | dVerse.

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Comments (11)

  1. kkkkaty1 says:
    November 3, 2013 at 4:40 pm

    What a way to wake up every day…. with the burst of colors from everywhere…not unlike the Aurora Borealis itself!

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    1. Adriana Citlali Ramírez says:
      November 3, 2013 at 7:31 pm

      i am glad you could “see” the colours in the poem. Thank you!

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  2. Myrna says:
    November 3, 2013 at 4:45 pm

    I’d like to wake up that way everyday. Thank you for the hope of a magical colorful adventure daily.

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    1. Adriana Citlali Ramírez says:
      November 3, 2013 at 7:33 pm

      I am trying to wake up this way –at least for one day … smiles

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  3. claudia says:
    November 3, 2013 at 6:25 pm

    nice…quetzal wings sound good…i always wanted to be able to fly when i was a kid…sometimes dreamt i could… and the dancing round the fire that gives birth to new suns… that would be fascinating for sure..

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  4. Brian Miller says:
    November 3, 2013 at 7:14 pm

    oo eclipse that sun with supernovas….smiles…i like the energy in that…i think creation energy is like that…in painting and well all art…or can be…and we do have those moments of clean canvas…each day though they do build on each other…

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  5. Loredana Donovan says:
    November 3, 2013 at 9:16 pm

    Beautiful colors & imagery 🙂

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    1. Adriana Citlali Ramírez says:
      November 3, 2013 at 10:14 pm

      Thanks for your kind words, Loredana.

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  6. Heaven (@ScarletVerses) says:
    November 4, 2013 at 12:50 am

    Specially like the last stanza ~ A rebirth or new beginnings, I like 🙂

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  7. Lill-Tove says:
    November 5, 2013 at 8:15 pm

    What a wonderful description of how easy and magic moments could be, thanks! You will understand that my inspiration to the link i posted elsewhere is from here 🙂

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    1. Adriana Citlali Ramírez says:
      November 6, 2013 at 5:16 pm

      Aurorae borealis are one of the specialties of the your home town, as I understand. I have been dreaming about them. I have yet to experience them in real life, though. 🙂

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