Push those clouds a w a y . . .
Kick them! Far! far a w a y
Take me f u r t h e r
S c e n t m y s k y w i t h
golden sunflowers
glowing honey velvety warmth
cinnamon ray-paths freshly-cut dawn
smooth dewdrops cacao hints
a first love kiss & ephemeral youth
E n h a n c e m y s e n s e s
L o s e c o n t r o l
F r e e m e
Again!
_____Adriana Citlali
VI-I-MMXVI
Adriana! A tremendos poem! “Enhence my senses” Love it!
My dear Mrs My Heaven,
Thanks for stopping by! Hugs and smiles!
Love it! 🙂
A sensual wonder this piece is, full of imaginative combinations ( i.e./freshly cut dawn/), fun to read, & i enjoyed chasing the words around the page as they formed interesting shapes. You rocked the prompt & salved my need for finding creativity out here on the dVerse trail.
Thanks, Glenn. It was a good prompt. Plus the long (almost snowless & dark) winter in Oslo really motivated me to remember sunny-scented times.
Well..
Adriana
i don’t often
provide compliments
directly.. but this one
is by far the best i come
across today.. keeping in
mind i come across them
all year long every one..
you knocked it out of
pArk
simply
’cause
you
capture
essence
of human Freedom
here.. the smell
that lives
within..
my
friend..:)
Thanks a lot! I an glad to read that these scattered words work for you. I felt free after writing this piece. And feel happy after reading your comment.
Smiles.. With happy New Year to you.. Friend..:)
¡¡Hermoso!! =)
Scent my sky with golden sunflowers… Your poem does just that. Simply beautiful!
I love all those scents… I can imagine them now specially when its cold and icy outside ~ Thanks for joining us and wishing you Happy New Year !
Happy new year, Grace! Wishing you the best from cold and icy Oslo.
Your words are lovely and we are all different but for me the ‘art display’ of the words distracts and diminishes.
Thanks for the feedback. I agree, we are all different. I do not expect this form to appeal to everyone. I’m glad, though, that you enjoyed the words.
What a lovely, scent-infused poem. You brought it all to life in your dramatic and fun write.
Gayle ~
This is just wonderful… all those scents, so soft and vivid… I can almost imagine the scents have color. I would love to hear this read.
I am considering reading and recording some poems. I might dare doing it! Thanks for the encouragement.
It’s fun… when I started I used my mobile-phone, but I have now bought a podcast mic… a big difference really.
Podcast mic? I’ll have to check that! 🙂
I bought one that you connect with USB… feels like being in a studio…
I agree 😀 this is absolutely amazing 😀
Love the creative formatting on this. It really did take me up, up, and away! Peace, Linda
So glad that it worked for you, Linda! Thanks.
Such a free mind full of joy…..very creative!
Your poem is so full of light and lift along with scent for me! So pretty!
As I scroll down I see many have comment on the use of scent in this and that’s exactly what smacked me…beautifully done.